The gentle pearl-grey wind entangled my hair a little more
The sparkling moonlit raindrops drenched me and my soul to the core
That ecstatic moment on a sandy shore
I love, I cherish and really adore.
I loved the aroma and loved the touch
The sand melted under my feet as such
But I felt peaceful inside and outside
That beautiful night I really adore
When I walked with him in rain on that sandy shore.
Beautiful poetry
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Thanks for enjoying it
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Lovely poem. The rithem itself sounds like rain drops touching different surfaces on earth. The last line wonderfully opens the poem. like a magic it gives it gives a special perspective to the expression
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Thanks 🙂
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Visual effects…. beautiful
Pretty cool…
State of mind matters the most…
Seems that protagonist is at peace with herself while standing on the seashore.
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yes peaceful blessed and blissful
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